Sunday Mornin' Comin' Down
Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Then I fumbled in my closet through my clothes
And found my cleanest dirty shirt.
Then I washed my face and combed my hair
And stumbled down the stairs to meet the day.
I'd smoked my mind the night before
With cigarettes and songs I'd been picking.
But I lit my first and watched a small kid
Playing with a can that he was kicking.
Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.
On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.
In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Then I headed down the street,
And somewhere far away a lonely bell was ringing,
And it echoed through the canyon
Like the disappearing dreams of yesterday.
On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
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默默然静静地主日晨临 1 (2)
睁眼时恍然是周日清晨, 托着头啊哟哟搁哪都疼, 喝啤酒作早点味道不错, 啤酒好当甜点再来一轮。 2.5 (2)
用完餐寻衣穿翻柜倒箱, 找不到只能拣脏乱衣裳, 漱完口洗完脸再梳头发, 踉跄跄晃下楼终见亮堂。 2.25 (4)
那一夜只记得烟雾云飘, 乡曲纯烟香浓亲手细挑, 戒不了又点上第一口烟, 看小孩玩空罐连踢带跑。 1 (2)
过大街跟着跑时闻香飘, 别家人炸鸡忙主日真好, 那一时那一瞬令我顿回, 遗失梦迷失路记忆旧道。 1.5 (2)
主日晨街沿边求神帮忙, 何不如迷如仙飘云高翔, 那一时纵然间难言之隐, 令身心更倍感孤独无往。 1 (2)
静无声寂无息都市梦萦, 大道上街沿边静寂声吟, 身无靠心更碎孤独堪亡, 默默然静静地主日晨临。 1 (2)
花园里又瞧见慈爱父亲, 荡秋千小女孩笑语盈盈, 主日学课堂外纵然止步, 细细听静静聆天音温馨。 1.5 (2)
沿着街继续走留去无从, 天涯边海角外单鸣孤钟, 荡山脉徊峡谷凄凄凉凉, 好不如昨日梦烟消无踪。 1 (2)
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週日早晨的落寞 2 (2)
週日晨朝猛然醒起 擾人頭疼束手無策 啤酒當餐主意不錯 一瓶再來就當點心 2 (2)
手入衣櫃遍尋衣物 找來最淨髒襯污衫 又洗了臉又梳了頭 蹣跚下樓邁向一天 1.5 (2)
前夜我含煙出了神 煙霧伴著心愛歌曲 點燃第一根我瞧著 小鬼嬉戲腳踢空罐 1 (2)
然後我漫步過街道 巧遇週日炸雞撲鼻 主阿我禁不住神遊 已失落的某某事地 1 (2)
週日朝晨人行道上 祈求默禱心如磐石 只為週日不知何事 孤單它圍繞我身旁 2.5 (4)
猶如死寂一般無異 似沉睡都市人行道 寂靜般的半份孤獨 與週日早晨的落寞 1 (2)
公園裡我目迎人父 和鞦韆上女孩笑顏 主日學旁途中駐足 豎耳傾聽盡情吟唱 1 (2)
而後我順街道獨行 遠處孤寂鐘聲響起 迴音嘹喨穿越峽谷 恍如昨夜飄渺夢境 2.5 (2)
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星期天的早晨从天而降 1 (2)
我在星期天的早晨醒来, 没有头疼,头脑却一片混沌。 早饭佐餐的啤酒味道不错, 所以又开了一瓶当作甜点。 1 (2)
然后我在衣橱凌乱的衣服堆里, 找到了我最干净的脏衬衫。 然后洗脸梳头,跌跌撞撞下楼, 迎接新的一天。 1.5 (2)
前一天晚上我无所事事, 听着精心挑选的歌曲吞云吐雾。 我点着了今天的第一根烟, 看着一个小孩在踢易拉罐玩。 3 (4)
然后我穿过街道, 闻到了有人在星期天炸鸡的味道。 这味道让我回想起过往, 让我有一种莫名失落的彷徨。 2.75 (4)
走在星期天早晨的人行道上, 我是如此希望自己仍在梦中游荡。 因为星期天总有些事情, 让人觉得孤独。 1 (2)
一切终将逝去, 如同孤独的回响, 徜徉在沉睡都市的人行道上。 星期天的早晨从天而降。 1 (2)
在公园里我看见一对父女, 父亲摇着秋千,女儿欢笑声如铃音般轻畅。 主日学校里传出的歌曲, 吸引我驻足倾听。 2 (2)
然后我沿着街道继续前行, 遥远的地方传来了孤独的钟声。 钟声在峡谷中发出回响, 一如我昨日消逝的梦想。 3 (2)
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星期天早晨降临 1 (2)
我在星期天的早晨醒来, 强打精神,痛苦不堪。 早餐喝的啤酒还不赖, 于是我加了份甜点当菜。 3 (4)
我在壁橱的衣帽中摸索, 找到件最干净的脏衬衫。 然后我洗了洗脸梳了梳头发, 迷迷糊糊地下楼开始一天的生活。 1.5 (3)
昨晚吸的烟和听过的歌曲, 在我的脑海里徘徊萦绕。 点起第一支烟时我看到一个小孩, 踢着罐头盒蹦蹦跳跳。 1 (2)
当我走到街的对面, 飘来了星期天的炸鸡味道。 于是昨日的时光重现, 过往的情景陪伴我一路回忆。 1.5 (2)
在星期天的人行道上, 我希望自己酩酊大醉。 因为在星期天的时光, 隐藏着让人孤独的东西。 1.5 (2)
没有什么东西像死亡这样短暂, 但死亡的寂寞仍比不上 沉睡的城市人行道上孤独的声音, 星期天的早晨从天而降。 1 (2)
在公园里我看到一位父亲, 还有摇荡在秋千上欢笑的小女孩。 我在一所主日学校旁驻足, 听着里面传来颂扬的天籁。 1 (2)
然后我沿街走下去, 听见远处响起了落寞的钟声。 这声音在山谷中回荡, 就像昨日的梦幻在渐渐消失。 3 (2)
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渐行渐远的周日早晨 1 (2)
噢,我在周日早晨醒来, 头不痛却晕。 当作早餐的啤酒不太差, 所以我又喝了些当作甜点。 1 (2)
然后摸索着衣橱里的衣服, 在一堆脏衣服里找到最干净的那件。 我洗过脸,梳了头, 蹒跚着走下楼梯,迎接这日子。 2.5 (2)
昨夜抽烟至思绪停滞, 藉着香烟和我挑的歌。 我燃起今天第一根烟,看着一个小孩 把罐头踢着玩。 1 (3)
然后我走过街那头, 周日炒鸡肉的味儿迎面而来。 主啊,这让我忆起曾失去的某些东西, 在某地,由于某种原因。 1 (2)
周日的早晨,在人行道上, 我在祈祷,主啊,我想要麻醉自己。 因为周日有一些东西 让我感觉到没有伴侣的孤寂。 2 (2)
除了死亡,没有其他东西 比空寂人行道上的声响 和渐行渐远的周日早晨 更让人觉得寂寞。 1.5 (2)
在公园里,我看到一位父亲 来回摇晃着咯咯笑的小女孩。 我停在主日学校旁边, 听里面传来的歌声。 2.5 (2)
然后沿着街道走下去, 远处的某地,响着孤寂的钟声, 在峡谷里回荡, 宛如昨日消逝的梦境。 2.5 (2)
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周日清晨,我一路走着 1 (2)
周日清晨我起来了,怎么捂着脑袋都很痛,早餐中的啤酒还是不错的,那就留着一瓶一会儿再喝。 2.75 (4)
从衣橱里找我的衣服,从脏衬衫中找到一件相对干净的。然后,我洗洗脸梳梳头,跌跌撞撞下楼去迎接这一天。 1 (2)
昨晚的烟抽得有点猛,歌听得也有点多,搞得我的脑子乱哄哄,但我刚点起第一支香烟,就看到一个孩子在踢盒子玩乐。 1.5 (2)
后来,我走过了街道,闻到周日谁家飘出的炸鸡味道,天啊,不知怎么,这味道一路上让我想起了什么。 2 (2)
在周日上午的人行道,上帝啊,真希望我能喝得烂醉找不到北,因为这样的日子总让人感到凄清和寂寞。 1 (2)
没有什么生而短暂,行将逝去,与这座沉睡城市的人行道相比,谁能较它更落寞,周日清晨我一路走着。 1 (2)
公园中,我看到一位老爸,一个小女孩被他摇得嘎嘎笑,我在一所周日学校门口停下脚步,听着里面传出歌声阵阵。 1 (2)
接着我继续沿着马路向前走,听到远方有钟声敲响,声音在峡谷中回荡,就像是昨日的梦魇碎成粉末。 1.5 (2)
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