Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

integrated

English answer:

comprehensive

Added to glossary by Ramey Rieger (X)
Feb 7, 2016 16:06
8 yrs ago
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English term

integrated

English Bus/Financial Computers: Systems, Networks The future of procurement
HELP! Can someone QUICKLY explain this to me? The monster is marked. It is part of a future scenario:

As a result of digital transformation and the growing proliferation of e-procurement, the risk of supply chain disruption is also rapidly growing. Therefore, it doesn’t really help if a company succeeds in keeping its security standards up to date, since the Internet of Things and increasing machine-to-machine (M2M) information exchange are not only popular for their productivity driving properties, they are also developing into the perfect gateway for cyber criminals. Current studies show massive economic damage provoked by data security incidents. For large companies, such an incident causes damages averaging at 720,000 USD. When it comes to extensive supply chain networks and major supplier bases, cyber criminals obviously don’t aim for the strongest, most highly secured link in the chain, but for the weakest. Reports of cyber-attacks on third-party suppliers, to obtain, for example, confidential customer information, are on the rise. ### In this age of digital transformation, viable security leak prevention demands that integrated supply chains make an even greater effort to integrate digital information into an integrated assessment of the value chain’s protective architecture. ### Especially when companies increasingly follow the quantified enterprise trend, aiming to maximize data management for organizational knowledge production.

Discussion

Ramey Rieger (X) (asker) Feb 8, 2016:
Good morning Phil! In the final, I put a comma after information and used generating. That was the best I could do in the time allowed. Yes, it was a translation from German, shockingly from a native speaker. Not one single gerund, tons of verb-derived nouns with 'of the' constructions and endless capitalizations...weird. But it's done and I did my best. I actually love editing, but this a true challenge. Thanks for your help.
philgoddard Feb 8, 2016:
The sentence is too long and clumsy, and you can't have two "to"s. I would break it down into two sentences.
I didn't realise it was a translation from German.
Ramey Rieger (X) (asker) Feb 7, 2016:
Can I say? In this age of digital transformation, viable security leak prevention demands that integrated supply chains make an even greater effort to bundle digital information to generate a comprehensive assessment of the value chain’s protective architecture.

I'm missing the second verb, and the above version helps me, at least, to understand the sentence. Or have I re-created it and left something out?

Responses

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comprehensive

Or unified, combined, joined-up... It means bringing together all the different issues and fields involved.
The text is not very well written, but this seems fairly straightforward.

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Note added at 11 mins (2016-02-07 16:17:26 GMT)
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Obviously you can't say integrate and integrated in the same sentence. "Incorporate" would be better for the first one.

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Note added at 40 mins (2016-02-07 16:46:45 GMT)
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Ramey: It's not an IT term. "Integrated assessment" is just everyday business parlance. You don't mention that you're having any problems with "integrated supply chain", so I assume you know what that means.
Note from asker:
Hi Phil, and THANKS for your quick response, I've got to deliver tomorrow. What concerns me is the possibility of mis-editing an IT term here. I don't really 'see' what the author means by "integrate digital information into an integrated assessment of the value chain’s protective architecture'
Yes, that term is not troubling me. Can you look at my attempt in the discussion box? This is merely a case of intense stress and frustration with poor translation of what was probably 'jargonized' German.
Peer comment(s):

agree Yvonne Gallagher
37 mins
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Sorry I took so long to close this! Thank you both."
+1
16 mins

horizontal and vertical (ISC)

horizontal and vertical (for the first instance of the word
integrated (for the second instance; self-explanatory)
comprehensive (for the third instance) (or comprehensive and interrelated)

"horizontal and vertical" can't really be said here, as it would sound awckard, but that is what it is saying.

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having said that..

"supply chain integration" (ISC) actually has a specific meaning; it is a close alignment and coordination within a supply chain. (see reference below)
Note from asker:
Thank you Charles!
Peer comment(s):

neutral philgoddard : I don't see how it justifies a 5.
17 mins
I agree
agree acetran
1 day 2 hrs
Thanks for agreement with me.
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